Below are links to the actual query letter that won the author an agent. Some letters have thoughts from the author about how the letter is written. Other letters have feedback from the agent on why the letter worked. And some have input from both the agent and author.
Each listing indicates the author’s name, the women’s fiction subgenre (i.e., historical, paranormal), and the agency representation.
Access to these links is available to RWA-WF members only.
Tracy Brogan (Contemporary Women’s Fiction) Book Cents Literary Agency
Keith Cronin (Commercial Fiction) Rusoff Agency
Michelle Diener (Historical Fiction) Represented by Stringer Literary
Shelley Freydont (Women’s Fiction) Represented by Marsal Lyon Literary Agency
Kristina McMorris (Historical Fiction) Represented by Spencerhill Associates
Sharla Scroggs (Paranormal Fiction) Represented by BookEnds,LLC – A Literary Agency
Lorrie Thomson (Women’s Fiction) Represented by BookEnds, LLC – A Literary Agency
Therese Walsh (Commercial Fiction) Represented by Weed Literary


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